User:MacSar.04/Lucila Villaseñor Grijalva/AleAlejandroAleAlejandro Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MacSar.04


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Lucila Villaseñor Grijalva
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lucila Villaseñor Grijalva

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Lead
 * very strong lead
 * lots of information to start off with
 * catches attention
 * Content
 * lots of content
 * a lot to learn from this single read
 * Tone and Balance
 * not biased
 * good and neutral
 * Sources and References
 * nice variety and number of sources
 * Organization
 * awesome flow
 * subtopics are enjoyable
 * Images and Media
 * n/a
 * New Article Feedback
 * artist seems notable from information and sources provided
 * sources seem fit
 * trustworthy information
 * footnotes