User:Macaroni n cheese/Psyche (mythology)/RagingWaterspout05 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Macaroni n cheese


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Macaroni_n_cheese/Psyche_(mythology)&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&veaction=edit&redirect=no
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Psyche (mythology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The lead section is well versed, with a good background to who Psyche. It introduces her name in Greek and Latin, states what her purpose was, and how she was described in the stories without being overbearing. There is nothing too specific in the first paragraph, and nothing is missing.

Content: The content is plentiful, though more images or references in pop culture could be useful.

Tone and Balance: The information in the article is very unbiased, and strictly follows the information presented in the stories that involve Psyche. There is no language that tries to sway an unfairly positive/negative stance. I have no suggestion for more neutral language as the article is very neutral.

Sources and References: The publications/people cited in the article are experts when it comes to analyzing the stories of Psyche and Greek Mythology. The reason I know this is because of how the authors are accredited and very scholarly. The authors for the information regarding Psyche include: Thomas Taylor, Ken Dowden, and many others that have made articles based around Psyche and the information from ancient Greek stories. Other sources that could be useful in regards to Psyche are: Direct references to the stories involving Psyche and other professors who dealt with Greek mythology.

Organization: The arrangement of information makes sense, as it starts with the early life of Pysche, and feels naturally progressive rather than skipping randomly or bringing up unrelated topics. The information presented is chronological. There are clear headings and sub-headings. I have no suggestions concerning information arrangements.

Images and Media: More image would be nice, especially since Psyche could have more modern interpretations.

Overall Impressions: A good start, and not much work is needed for the entire article to be really good. More grammatical fixes, pop culture references, and images would help to flesh it out.