User:Macaroon19/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Bordetella pertussis

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because there were not many details about the actual bacterium. There is more information about diagnosis, treatment, and history. Understanding the cellular components of a bacterium can influence why it acts the way it does. I think there is a lot of great information on the article, but it is more about what the bacteria can cause rather than how it acts as a bacteria.

Evaluate the article
There is one spot that needs a citation. It is on the article that a citation is needed. I also want to see if there is a better resolution image of Bordetella pertussis. The mention of "whoop" is also present many times throughout the article. There is a great amount of information about what Bordetella pertussis can cause, treatments, history, and prevention. There is a small amount of information about how the bacterium actually acts and grows. I would like to add more information on the bacterium and how it interacts with it's environment.