User:Macerpa/Poverty law/LLAVE42 Peer Review

Hey Michael,

Because we worked on your sandbox in class, I can tell you took the advice to heart and really worked out a neutral encyclopedic tones that fits the Wikipedia style. The re-write you did of the section above covers the relationships between the laws and their real world application.

Don't forget to cite where "the legal statutes, regulations and cases that apply particularly to the financially poor in his or her day to day life." came from, as well as note why you decided to change the lead.

Can you link Southern Poverty Law Center to any existing sites or links? Maybe their page or an article that talks about their work?

I would create a separate Federal Regulation section to post that information. It is significant enough to warrant its own section and space.

For your income guidelines, I recommend linking the page where you sourced that info from, and note how current those values are.

Just please be sure to cite your sources. Everything reads well, but indicating your sources can easily compromise your work.