User:Mackcato/Corita Kent/AnimalLover257 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mackcato


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mackcato/Corita_Kent?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Corita Kent

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think that adding in Corita Kent's parents was some clever information to add, but I'd encourage you to also add in a little more. You might even be able to write in a paragraph about Corita Kent's parents/home life if finding more information on Corita is difficult. There's already a lot on Kent's wiki page, so it seems like it would be difficult to find new info, but try adding in more subtle things like you did in your sandbox if you're having trouble. For example, you could also add more information in the "Death" section because it seems much shorter than the rest of the sections in the official article.