User:Mackcato/Corita Kent/Redwood432 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mackcato


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mackcato/Corita KentUser:Mackcato/Corita Kent
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Corita Kent

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like what you added to the article so far. I think you could probably move some information around as the lead seems pretty long for just being an introduction. Maybe add a couple more sections? You're doing a good job of keeping the tone neutral. I would like to know more about her childhood and why she was born in a car. Is it possible to add more images of her work to the page?