User:Mackenzieallard/Yuni Ahn/Boomshaqui Peer Review

General info
(provide username) Mackenzieallard
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing User:Mackenzieallard/Yuni Ahn:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) N/A

Lead
- Lead is strong and concise delivering information that is in the article

- Could have a bit more information that outlines all of the sections in the page (maybe just mentioning some element of early life)

Content
- All content is relevant

- It fills an equity gap, representing overlooked creatives and women of colour in recent fashion history

- Also bringing Asian fashion and designers towards the Western mainstage

- What trio is being refered to in the Maison Kitsuné section?

Tone and Balance
- The article is very neutral presenting facts as facts

- No obvious bias detected

- Positive connotation of Yuni Ahn's work is infered simply for the positive work she did

Organization
- Article is well organized, adding the appropriate subsections where fit and necessary

- Sections are apropriate in length with the relevant amount of information available to each

- Easy to read and follow

New Articles
- The list of resources is impressively long given the amount of information on the subject let alone in English

- It does not link to other Wikipedia articles which would be a benefitial addition

Overall
- The article is strong, well and neutrally written with as much information as available accumulated in one place

- Few changes could be slightly altering one citation I noted above and adding Wikilinks into the article to allow easier of navigation on the website