User:Mackenziebrumbaugh/Impulse purchase/Nrkjordaan Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? I was reviewing Mackenziebrumbaugh
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Mackenziebrumbaugh/Impulse purchase

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? Not really, it doesn't seem so.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? Minimal, I don't think so honestly.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? Its short and to the point.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Yes it was edited 5/07/2020
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? Missing some stuff, does not seem to have that much info.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? Not that I can see.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? No, I don't think so.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? Persuade.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? I think so, Yes
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes there are sources.
 * Are the sources current? No, most resent is 2011.
 * Check a few links. Do they work? Yes they work.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes its easy to read.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? Not that I have seen.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Yes.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? Article is not complete.
 * What are the strengths of the content added? The intro of the article.
 * How can the content added be improved? Every section needs a little improvement.