User:Mackenziegan/Cross-dressing/Daisyyvenegas Peer Review

General info
Mackenziegan
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Mackenziegan/Cross-dressing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Cross-dressing

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really liked the headings and the way the article was overall structured. Iliked that I was able to know what the examples would entail (sports, war and journalism).

To add some general comments, the content is neutral and I like the phrasing. It keeps the reader entertained without adding too mcuh embellishment. I think maybe adding a picture as an example would be nice. It would give good insight into how convincing their outfits were.

Something I loved was the background for each other the headings. it gave insight into why cross dressing was necessary and was relevant to the example.

I liked that the soucres all came from diffrent places and I saw that citiations well be added soon which will make it more obvious when looking at what source said what.