User:Mackinacfudge/Abu Ghraib torture and prisoner abuse/Gracemillettvanderbilt Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mackinacfudge


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Abu Ghraib torture and prisoner abuse


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead of this article is very informative. It gives a general overview of what the issue was and how America responded to it. The lead sentence is concise and clearly describes the topic of the article. The lead gives an overview of the articles sections but could give a little more information on the media coverage of the torture. The lead is concise and provides adequate detail for the article. The content of the whole article is very clear. The sections build upon each other in a chronological fashion. They are very well organized and go into adequate detail. Each section provides a link to further information on the subject. It comes from a neutral point of view and does not over represent a single groups viewpoint. The viewpoints are non biased and simply give facts on the topic. Though this is a difficult topic to report on, the author does a good job of staying neutral and not taking a side or showing their opinion. The article has an extensive source page and each piece of information connected to a cited source within the reference page. The source list is short but the reference list is long; maybe find a few more source pieces. The links work well and are well organized for a reader of they want to find more information on the topic. The content is really well organized into a number of different sections. The writing has easily understandable vocabulary and there are very few grammatical errors in the easy. The article includes a number of shocking images that elaborate on the torture but could be seen as biased or persuasive in some way. The images are all cited well and are scattered throughout the article well; they break up the article. This article has necessary infoboxes and section headers. This article could be cleaned up a little bit and made more concise however this is a great article.