User:Macwilliams3/Mendocino Triple Junction/RYNO FIVE Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Macwilliams3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Macwilliams3/Mendocino Triple Junction
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mendocino Triple Junction

Evaluate the drafted changes
What is "this" referring to? It is referring to the Mendocino Fracture zone or the Gorda Ridge?

Grammar

This region is can be characterized by transform fault movement, the San Andreas also by transform strike slip movement,... Change to "strike-slip" as it is a term and This region is .... get rid of the "is" it is not grammatically correct

Check your commas you have many commas that don't belong

"This area is tectonically active historically and today." change "is" to has been as it was in the past

In the lithology section

Volcanics is not a term it is volcanic

Use correct geological terms like sedimentation thickness

All things considered it was great