User:Madd2022/Nicole Ferentz/Ansleyb Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Madd2022


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Madd2022/Nicole_Ferentz?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I'm so impressed by your draft! The tone is neutral and you have a great range of information and sources which you lay out clearly and logically. I only have small suggestions for things like format. I think the subsection "Roz Warren's Cartoon Collections" would look a little more cohesive with the rest of the article if all those sentences in separate paragraphs were either condensed into longer paragraphs or changed into bullet points. Also, i think you can probably add a hyperlink to the "Lambda Literary Award" (to this article: Lambda Literary Award). I know you already have a link in the next line to the 2nd and 9th Awards, but there is also a general page for Lambda, so I think linking both could probably add to the credibility of your article. Really great work!