User:MaddiMcg/Conversion disorder/Allysch Peer Review

General info
MaddiMcg
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:MaddiMcg/Conversion disorder
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Conversion disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.) I would personally like to see more information about what may trigger Conversion disorders. I understand that stressor or trauma is what typically triggers the disorder, but maybe some good examples of that would be helpful? The symptoms (especially divided into two groups) are very detailed and easy to understand. The section titled "specify if" is a little difficult to understand, but could also be worded differently. Talking about what symptoms effect the prognosis may give readers a better understanding of what criteria may give a longer life. The history section could possibly be moved to the top of the article? I prefer to read about the background and history of a topic before I dive into the details. Overall great work and great article that has much potential. What you have written in your own sandbox is a great start