User:MaddiMcg/Conversion disorder/AngelOffley Peer Review


 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MaddiMcg


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:MaddiMcg/Conversion disorder


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Conversion disorder

Lead

The lead doesn't quite capture the new info about symptoms arising from stress and mental health conditions yet, so I would definitely include that. It gives a good overview but could be more specific about how stress and mental health play a role. I would make sure it briefly touches on symptoms, causes, diagnosis, treatment, and historical context.

Content and Source/References

The new content about stress and mental health causing symptoms is totally relevant. Just make sure it's up-to-date with the latest research. You might want to add more about how this affects different demographics to fill any equity gaps. And, of course, back everything up with reliable sources. Aim for recent studies and a diverse range of authors to get a well-rounded perspective.

Tone and Balance

The content stays neutral, which is great. I would make sure to keep it balanced by representing multiple viewpoints fairly.

Organization

The new content is well-written but could use a quick review for clarity and conciseness. Double-check for any grammatical or spelling errors, and make sure it fits smoothly into the existing structure with the right section headings.

Images and Media

There are currently no images included, so if any images are included, they should definitely enhance understanding of the topic. Make sure they're well-captioned and visually appealing!