User:MaddiMcg/Conversion disorder/Makylam18 Peer Review

General info
Maddi- @MaddiMcg
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:MaddiMcg/Conversion disorder/Bibliography:User:MaddiMcg/Conversion disorder
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Conversion disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
There was not a substantial amount of work in the sandbox draft for me to give an detailed peer review. I reviewed the bibliography page and it was very easy to navigate and I believe that the articles are good sources. You described each source and they appear to be reliable. As you continue to add on to your article and edit, you can find more sources that are peer reviewed. Since there was not much to review, I went over the original article and came up with some directions that you can continue your draft. To continue adding to the article, you could do a few things:


 * adding citations to treatments
 * expanding on deliberate feigning
 * consolidating the history section
 * tweaking the signs and symptoms section