User:Maddie2025/Livestreamed crime/Hazel42121 Peer Review

(peer review at bottom)

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Maddie2025
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 * User:Maddie2025/Livestreamed crime
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 * Livestreamed crime

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 * I would suggest adding hyperlinks to other wikipedia articles where you mention the ongoing Israel-Palestine conflict as well as where you mention the dark web
 * I think the grammar at the end of the sentence here can be changed from: "Many times the videos are of hostages or prisoner of war that is used as leverage..." to "Many times the videos are of hostages or prisoner s of war that are used as leverage..."
 * I believe the information you've added so far is beneficial to the article and cited reliable sources.