User:Maddie9797/African-American hair/Jkintu Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jasmine Kintu


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * African American Hair


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * African-American hair

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I like what you added or edited, I also like the picture added showing what someone with 4c hair would look like. I think you could add maybe one more picture but other than that everything is good. I like the part you edited about the natural hair movement and how there were example of African American women who participated in the movement.