User:Maddie9797/African-American hair/Litnik22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Maddie9797)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * African-American hair


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * African-American hair

Evaluate the drafted changes
I found that there is minor corrections in the article besides grammar and punctuation mistakes. Citations were strong but could always use more in terms of "Popular Hair". You could include modern African hair today in terms of "Afro:Futuristic" Hair