User:Maddie9797/African-American hair/Liyuabel2003 Peer Review

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Maddie9797


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 * African-American hair


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 * African-American hair

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Great information and expansion on the idea that truly impacted my own ideas. I think you could add more images and see how some populations in cities impacted by black hair view things. Otherwise looks really good and I honestly loved eveything. Maybe add some more sources and fix the format for citing but thats all.