User:MaddieAcheson/Least restrictive environment/Leilabarbera Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Relijohn


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Relijohn/Least_restrictive_environment?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The introduction does a good job of clarifying what the article is about. It defined LRE in a legal sense and explained what it is.

Content

I like the list of categories of disabilities. The explanation of each category is helpful because it shows this article is written for anyone without a disability studies background to understand. However, these definitions take up most of the page. Maybe consider adding more about LRE including examples, case studies, alternative views, private versus public schools, etcetera. In the conclusion there is a mention of whether LRE can be isolating, it would be interesting to expand upon different perspectives.

Tone and Balance

Aim toward being more neutral by quoting legislation and providing all perspectives on LRE.

Sources and References

Only one source, older than 5 years so outdated. It would help to have a more current source or a source with a different perspective. Also would be helpful to cite the IDEA.

Organization

Good flow of information, well organized. Some spelling and grammar errors.

Images or Media

N/A

Talk Page

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Overall Impressions

Overall, this information provides limited information about LRE. There is a lack of evidence and example. The source is outdated and limited.