User:Maddie beckley/Trudier Harris/InstantPineapple Peer Review

General info
(provide username)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Maddie Beckley


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Trudier_Harris&diff=1187677591&oldid=1151451813:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Good research on the background and correcting incorrect information. You also have good neutrality on the information you provide.

For your references, make sure they can be accessed by others / that they lead back to a document supporting your assertions. Illiad can only be accessed by the person that made that request so your two current links - while good that your'e backing up your data, make sure that those links are accessible to the public if tagging them.

It would be beneficial to see a section on her career and more on her education/ develop what she did in college using possible articles and sources. You may also want to include any possible awards that she has received for her literature and could potentially check the other links to make sure they are all correct / up-to-date. You could also expand on her family section, writing about her siblings and their relationship.