User:Maddiebayley/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Bechdel test

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because it is the one I will be editing for my wikipedia assignment.

Evaluate the article
Lead Section:

The lead section for the "Bechdel Test" is okay. The lead sentence could be stronger, and it's explanation of the test needs to be more concise. There are only 2 named sources for this section, which needs to be improved. This passage is very wordy and needs to be edited to be more concise.

Content:

The content of the article is accurate but does not include many modern sources. I believe that with a modern topic such as the Bechdel Test, it is imperative to have modern sources as well. Therefore, I will need to research and include more modern sources for this page.

Tone and Balance:

This article does a good job of staying neutral. This article does a good job of representing the history of the test, but does not include much about the modern implications of the test.

Organization and Writing Quality:

The author does a good job of presenting the information, but the descriptions could be more concise.