User:Maddiemohon/Bubonic plague/Oneton III Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bubonic plague group


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Maddiemohon/Bubonic plague


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bubonic plague

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like the new info you're adding in the diagnosis, prevention, and treatment sections! Could you expand on those more?

The section by section, small chunks approach feels like a good plan since this is already a longer article. Do you have chunks you're planning on replacing/fully removing?

Any figure changes? Maybe add one with FMF? The distribution figure is also pretty old.

I actually just saw a cool paper about plague immunity, it could be useful: https://www.nature.com/articles/s41586-022-05349-x I'd love to see more aDNA stuff, but I also just like aDNA research in general

Where you planning on adding any sections or sticking with adding to existing sections?