User:Maddiemohon/History of smallpox in Mexico/NoahErdac Peer Review

General info
Maddiemohon
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Maddiemohon/History_of_smallpox_in_Mexico?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * History of smallpox in Mexico

Complimentary

 * The draft has a bulky content which is admirable
 * It is concise and well written
 * It has a very good introduction and lead
 * It contains accurate citations and reliable links
 * The tone is neutral
 * It has good structure and is appealing
 * It has multiple citations (diverse authors)
 * The content added improves the article overall
 * The content is relevant

Critical

 * The topics could use a bit of editing to make them a heading
 * I suggest putting the citations under a different heading of "References"