User:Maddiemohon/History of smallpox in Mexico/Ry.skiles Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

DianaatOU, Nyreebailey03, Maddiemohon


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Maddiemohon/History_of_smallpox_in_Mexico?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * History of smallpox in Mexico

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article draft contains the base article of The History of Smallpox In Mexico.

There is a good basis for keeping the article going and revising as well as the addition of new information as research progresses. The article is very well organized.

I appreciate that the changes can be observed in bold. It was very helpful to see draft notes. Grammar and overall structure is adequate. Very good start.

The only thing for critique that I can suggest is: Add more to your bibliography.