User:Maddydembowski/sandbox


 * Everything in this article is relevant to Mac Miller and his life story
 * the article is very unbiased and not showing one person's opinion on Mac
 * most of the points the author of the article contributes is well worded and represented very well
 * the references worked that they used and were related to everything they wrote about Mac
 * this is a useful source because it's up to date on everything as in every 2019
 * the talk page had some people comment saying some of the stuff was false information

Article Proposal and Bibliography
For my Wikipedia article edit, I'm going to work on the Mac Miller article. Here is what I plan on adding and improving.


 * Add more about his feelings through quotes
 * Improve the structure as in add a section
 * Adding content that is relevant to his life as an artist instead of focusing on his music

For my article edit, I am planning on improving Mac Miller's article. Mac Miller was an inspiration and a model to a lot of people. Editing this article, I would like to add more information on his family and girlfriend relationships. More so, the way he looked at the people surrounding him and supporting him through his struggle and sort of crazy life as an artist. Mac has some quotes that anyone can relate to no matter if you look at it in a positive or negative way even if you don't like him. I'd like to make sure all the information on this page is correct too. I am planning on adding an "Artistry" section and more information in the "influences" section. I feel that the article needs organized and more sections with more detail in each one.

https://heavy.com/entertainment/2018/09/mac-miller-nomi-leasure-2013-wife/

https://people.com/music/mac-miller-dead-apparent-overdose/

https://heavy.com/entertainment/2018/09/mac-miller-family-parents-mother-father/

https://www.post-gazette.com/opinion/Op-Ed/2018/11/11/Importance-of-Mac-Miller-Pittsburgh-late-rapper-inspired-generation-of-youth-Seamus-Roddy-Next-Page/stories/201811110010

https://www.thefamouspeople.com/profiles/mac-miller-15936.php

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xrAsgL1YF4w

Comments from Dr. Vetter
Hi Maddy,

You're missing your article proposal and bibliography. This is an important part of the article draft assignment (due last Friday, Feb. 22). Please review the assignment and let me know should you have any questions. -Dr. Vetter