User:Maddyheymann/Birgit Rausing/Clouds90210 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Maddyheymann


 * Link to article you're reviewing
 * Birgit Rausing


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Birgit Rausing Revision History: Sep. 2020

Evaluating the article
Currently, the article is very short, with only 2 references. Therefore, not surprisingly, I do believe it is necessary to find more sources with information on Birgit Rausing, her work as an art historian, her father and his work as a painter, or her stepfather and husband and their work with Tetra Pak. This will likely be difficult, as these are Swedish people of interest, however I do think it can be done. The infobox of the article states that Rausing's birthday could be between 2 years. I think it would be helpful to include more precise information on her age. The article is also clearly unbalanced with most of the information in the biography section. I would recommend evening it out by focusing edits in the "Gad and Birgit Rausing Library" section, or in possible new sections based on the points of information listed earlier. Finally, the bibliography and references section should be combined, or the bibliography section can be turned into a "Further reading" section if the source listed isn't used in the article.