User:Maddyheymann/Birgit Rausing/Maryia17 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) maddyheymann


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Birgit Rausing


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think it is a good leading section that has a clear description of the subject. Very neutral and fact-based tone. Good use of image as well. Only edit or suggestion is possible is possibly some more resources but I understand that it is often difficult to find good sources.