User:Maddyvotypka/Harp Lake/DanielleNabor Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Maddyvotypka


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Maddyvotypka/Harp_Lake?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Maddyvotypka/Harp_Lake?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Maybe define oligotrophic to help the reader understand? Also explain what dimicdic stratification means briefly?

Make sure you cite your sources when you used facts and stats, such as the lakes size.

What does the pH affect when it is acidic? This could be interesting to expand on.

Maybe comment on how forested watershed can affect lakes in general to expand?

What are spodosols?

You discuss the outcomes of watershed on the lake but maybe expand on what these mean and their impact?

Your sources seem applicable and abundant!

I like that you broke your article down into multiple headings to separate the information.