User:Maddyvotypka/Harp Lake/Katiebusch7 Peer Review

Hi Maddy,

Below are my comments on your first draft. Your current word count is 518 and you have 5 refs (all scientific articles).

First I love the use of subheading this makes it easier for the reader to flow through your article.

Overall this is very well written. There are a few grammatical errors here and thr but a few read throughs can fix that. My biggest thought is that you need to link some of the more scientific words to their own wiki pages so if a reader is unfamiliar with a word they can click the hyperlink to find out what it means. You also have a few statements that need references following them. Good start in the invasives section there are plenty of other species you could fill in there or feel free to shift to another research topic. Overall good start just make sure to add links for the none common words.

-Katie

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