User:Maddyvotypka/Harp Lake/Natureab30 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Maddyvotypka


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Maddyvotypka/Harp_Lake?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A
 * Lead
 * I like how you started the basic characteristics of the lake, however, I feel there still be more information added to get the reader interested in the lake. Such as how is this lake different from others? You do mention the increase of Na from road salt, maybe say more about that, such as the future effects in freshwater ecosystems'
 * Organization
 * Organization seems to fit well on each topic but I would continue to add more information on each topic to make the information well supported.
 * Sources and References
 * Great sources and good recent articles too but more recent sources give it more support when you finish your draft.
 * Content
 * Pretty good content, but I will give more information in certain terms such as meteorological station, what are the purposes with limnology? Possibility the effects of temperature changes and increase of Na in lakes. Explain invasive species and their effects on the environment and how they could outcompete in the future. Just in general, more content
 * Tone and balance
 * No biases towards this article

Evaluate the drafted changes
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