User:Maddyvotypka/Harp Lake/Sophie Bazan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Maddyvotypka


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Maddyvotypka/Harp_Lake?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Harp Lake

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great job! Everything seemed to be neutral and relevant to the topic. I was a bit confused on how the cation concentrations were related though, so a sentence or so there would help. It may also be helpful to explain why this lake is a bit more acidic. The section on invasive species was interesting, as well as the geographic features. It may be helpful to add some information about research that takes place on the lake. Since this lake doesn't have a well-built page yet, it may also be helpful to include some background information on the origins of the lake and how it was created. Great job including in text citations!