User:MadeleineMarieC/Childhood schizophrenia/Ashleyff Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Madeline Marie C


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MadeleineMarieC/Childhood_schizophrenia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The changes you made to the article are very informative and add to the article, but the sentence after your explain the definition of apathy may need to be combined into a larger compound sentences or further explained that the sentence after is referring back to apathy. I like how you explained all of the symptoms you added to the article, but I think "blunted emotional affect" should be given an example of what it is as well to be more clear with your symptoms.