User:MadeleineMarieC/Childhood schizophrenia/Dmwhite98 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MadeleineMarieC


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MadeleineMarieC/Childhood_schizophrenia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Childhood schizophrenia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The part of the article that was edited in the sandbox is full of good information, but it is very definition heavy. I would not take out any of the information but I would try to add so facts related to that subsections. If there is not much to add to it then maybe dispersing the definitions throughout different subsections. another idea that could be done is hyperlinking the word so when the mouse is hovered on the word, the definition would show. Looking at the original article, I would consider elaborating more on the epidemiology section of the article. I would state a little more statistic since it already state a little.