User:MadeleineMarieC/Childhood schizophrenia/Sok18 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MadeleineMarieC


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MadeleineMarieC/Childhood_schizophrenia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Childhood schizophrenia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I would suggest making the negative symptoms section into bulletins so it will flow better. Also, I would suggest you look to see if you can find more information on positive symptoms.