User:Madeline Bailey/California species of special concern/PresleyThor Peer Review

General info
Madeline Bailey
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Madeline%20Bailey/California_species_of_special_concern?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Her sandbox
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):California species of special concern
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):California species of special concern

Evaluate the drafted changes
I don’t think there appears to be a lead, at leas there isn’t anything under the section titled “lead”. But the introductory sentence is good and explains SSC or CSC and how it’s defined/designated.

Your added content is relevant to the topic and seems to be up to date. You r content also appears to be neutral, but I think you could expand more upon these species of special concern. Your source looks credible and is cited and accurately reflects what the cited source says. I think you could add more sources and more information to make this a more substantial article. I was not able to get the links to work when I clicked on the cited source. I noticed there was only that one source you used, and the article itself only has 2 listed so I would definitely add more sources. I liked how you organized everything, it was concise and easy to read, there did not appear to be any errors. I think you should also add images and media to enhance the article. I think you did well unplagarizing this article and editing it, and should make more edits.

It does not look like your edits were published to the official article, but I know you were having issues with that as was I. I have not been able to get any of my work to publish.