User:Madelineknisley/Tuberculin/Emedmunds Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Madelineknisley


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Tuberculin


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reading the information in your sandbox, the only information you have added is an additional definition from the CDC on what the Mantoux Tuberculin Skin Test is, and how the procedure is completed. I believe both sentences look too close to the original verbiage the CDC uses, and it most likely will be flagged for plagiarism. If you were to rearrange the sentence structure completely rather than simply add or delete words from the original sentence, it would be better. The links are working and your citations look correct, however, I am only seeing the same link used twice rather than two separate sources, so there is no need to have both links and both in text citations. Removing one of the links could also help clarity when your information is merged in the original article. I believe the information you found does in fact enhance the quality of the article- so good work on that! This being said, I really do feel the article could use much more. I would suggest maybe adding a Procedure section and move the information about the procedure to that section and find more information to add as well.Your information sounds neutral.