User:MadisonFerguson/Sexism of American Media Awards/Burve003 Peer Review

Bibliography:

A lot of good resources

Article:

Great look

Seems kind of one sided, meaning very focus on pushing against the sexism but we are technically supposed to be neutral.

Add more info for Tony's, and Oscars

Add more examples for Sexual harassments articles

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)