User:MadisonMat13/Scalloped hammerhead/Captainkerme Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MadisonMat13


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MadisonMat13/Scalloped_hammerhead?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Scalloped hammerhead

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Your sandbox is very organized and has wonderful detail! The only thing I can suggest, and this is more-so related to the original article, is maybe to separate the conservation section with some headings that can break down all the information better. As of right now, it appears as a whole page length of paragraphs in comparison to the other headings, so I think a couple subheadings would help a lot to digest it all and find specific conservation efforts.

Additionally, I think the conservation section should also include more hyperlinks to other Wikipedia articles, and maybe one or two in other sections which are maybe lacking.

I like your taxonomy section, but the reference you used is from 1998 and may not be accurate. If possible, it may be beneficial to find a more current reference that may have updated information.

The predation section is very interesting and I think it makes a wonderful addition to the article!