User:Madison Luzar/Labor unions in the united states/Serinali Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Madison Luzar


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Madison%20Luzar/Labor_unions_in_the_united_states?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall really great! Just some minor narrative change to wikipedia tone: for example, "When it became clear". These phrases may be too essay like. Also when citing an author, such as Graubart writes, might be helpful to give the name and context of the article.