User:Madisonminelli/Prison healthcare/Hannahmontana321 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) I will be reviewing the Prison Healthcare wikipedia page which in our class comprises of members such as the username of madisonminelli!


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * The link to the draft I'll be editing today: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Madisonminelli/Prison_healthcare?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The link to current version of the article that exists today: Prison healthcare

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall, this is a really interesting article you all chose and the additions you all made expanded on the often hidden parts of the story which I really appreciated! I know in terms of content you added you mentioned a lot on two specific experiments giving a lot of background on them both, is there any wikipedia links to those experiments that can provide the majority of the background allowing you all to list a lot more experiments throughout history that people should keep on their radar? Like for example instead of linking the words Sloan Kettering Institute and oncologist, is ther a wikipedia link for the specific doctor's name? Although the information is wonderful, it just seems very detailed for what are examples. You have a really thorough list of sources, and your tone I see as neutral so very good job on that! I also really like the flow of your additions it felt very story-like and not choppy at all which kept me engaged as a reader! I'm excited to see your final results!