User:Madisonminelli/Prison healthcare/Lm1403 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ariannalicupgarcia, RFW17, Madisonminelli


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Madisonminelli/Prison_healthcare?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Prison healthcare

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good job expanding the history section, you added a lot of detail. Additionally, the number of scholarly sources that you reference in your edits is really impressive! I like that you added new content to expand the focus of the UK section. It would be a big project, but I think the article would benefit from the inclusion of some additional non-Western examples—this would be hard but maybe you could leave it as a suggestion to future editors?

I noticed a minor spelling error in your sandbox ("recieve") but I see that this has been corrected in the published version.~