User:Madisonminelli/Prison healthcare/TakeYourMarks Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

madisonminelli, rfw17, ariannalicupgarcia


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Madisonminelli/Prison_healthcare?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Prison healthcare

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a very important topic and I am glad this group has taken on this challenge. The bullet points they listed were a little hard to follow out of context, but some strong points are included, like the temporary nature of their sentences hindering their access to healthcare and the interesting fact that inmates often receive more care in prison than they do once released. I would like to see this article name the clear relationship between class and incarceration, citing some statistics on lower class and access to healthcare in the US.

I was surprised to see a fact about NHS England and think it's great to have an international perspective. I would encourage comparisons with other countries, as well. The unsettling history provided was comprehensive and provided context for healthcare in the prison system today.