User:Madisontate1/Conservation dependent species/Hreuter4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Madisontate1

"Conservation dependent species"


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Madisontate1/Conservation_dependent_species?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Conservation-dependent species

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * Madison you added a lot to this initial article. I think that additional sections that you created fit well and create a better well rounded view of the topic at hand. The only thing that I could possibly think for you to add more to this article would be to look at the first/introduction section and maybe add something to that there.
 * The addition of the challenge section was really nice and I think that it was great information to add.
 * The only thing that I could say that if there were any pictures that you could find to add. I think that would make the page look really nice because the information you have is fantastic.
 * Here's another reference
 * Dale D. Goble, John A. Wiens, J. Michael Scott, Timothy D. Male, John A. Hall, Conservation-Reliant Species, BioScience, Volume 62, Issue 10, October 2012, Pages 869–873, https://doi.org/10.1525/bio.2012.62.10.6