User:Madisontate1/Conservation dependent species/Pelang5115 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Madisontate1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Madisontate1/Conservation_dependent_species?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Conservation-dependent species
 * Conservation-dependent species

Evaluate the drafted changes
Dear Tate,

- The sections you have added are appropriate for this article. I know you didn't write the lead section but it could use a rewrite. Its a little muddled. You can clarify after the "i.e." in the first sentence. I know there's a better way to define what these species are. Maybe try to find any updated count of conservation dependent species, the last one was 2015.

- I would define flora and g better through that section. Some people might know what you're referring to in this section between the plant and animal species.

- A picture or two of a conservation dependent plant and animal would make this page look nice.

- Great citations!

- If you wanted to include more of an example: https://www.marineconservation.org.au/wp-content/uploads/2019/09/AMCS-Scalloped-Hammerhead-report-Final.pdf