User:Madmac25/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * "New Pune Airport"


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is out of date and could use updated information. I would also fact check to see if these predictions apply to the current state of the airport. Lastly, not very informational.


 * Sources
 * Heavy copyedit

Option 2

 * Article title
 * "Abortion in Tennessee"


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article seems a little biased. Not majorly, however the emphasis on all the possible exceptions not being met come off as they feel like they disagree with it. The article is flagged for a particular term that disregards guidelines.


 * Sources
 * Heavy copyedit

Option 3

 * Article title
 * "Louis Armstrong"


 * Article Evaluation
 * The style can be adjusted. Some sentences are short and choppy while changing topic quickly.


 * Sources
 * Medium-lebel copyedit

Option 4

 * Article title
 * "Political hip hop"


 * Article Evaluation
 * There is some redundancy in the sentences that can be combined to sound better. There are minor grammar corrections to be made.


 * Sources
 * Medium-level copyedit

Option 5

 * Article title
 * "Jumping the broom"


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article could use some rearranging. The cohesion could be better. I would put the historical information closer to the beginning.


 * Sources
 * Medium-level copyedit