User:Madnel4/Gestalt psychology/Sdmlas Peer Review

General info
Madnel4
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Madnel4/Gestalt_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Gestalt psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The leading article was not changed but I agree with the proposed changes in that it is a little congested. There was no information added in the origin and history section but the layout needs work as said. It is very difficult to follow and stay engaged with the information given. There is a lot of information given that may not be necessary when learning about Gestalt Therapy that may could be taken out or condensed. The Gestalt Therapy section is repeating information so it could be deleted completely or the information could be condensed and moved to a different section. The contributions section has a good idea with sub-sections but they are not formatted in a good way and could be changed to fit better. Take out the plagiarized paragraph that has no citations or paraphrase it.