User:Madrugada11/Wilbour Papyrus/Traven Murphy Peer Review

General info
Madrugada11
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Madrugada11/Wilbour Papyrus
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Wilbour Papyrus

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

the sources you added are good and the photos you added are good, for a more personal touch to the edits, make clear which parts you added to the texts themselves, there's a lot to work with. regardless, everything you added seems relevant to the project and up to date relative to the assignment!

overall, a good start with stuff you plan to work on!