User:Mads1978/Memot Circular Earthworks/Gcecchi2 Peer Review

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Mads1978


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 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mads1978/Memot_Circular_Earthworks?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
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The lead works well introducing the topic of the Memotian Circular Earthworks and allows me to know the general location. It gives me good background on the history of the site excavations, as well as issues in modern time with discovering sites and starting and working on these excavations due to issues in the political landscape of some countries in this area. As this topic is having a brand new Wikipedia page created for it, all of the information provided seems up to date and reliable according to the resources provided by this group. All of the content so far does connect back to the Memotian Circular Earthworks. All of the points provided are neutral and do not attempt to sway a reader to a certain viewpoint. All of the sources relate to the topic and are all written from 2000 and later. There are no pictures added yet. This article does seem to meet Wikipedia's Notability requirement, as well as being laid out nicely and written in a way that is easy and quick to read and understand. There could be a few more links in my opinion, for things like nations mentioned that are related to this site, however this is not a necessary step for this article to be good in its current state. I am unsure if it is a typo, as it could just be a different language, but in the Excavation History section, Memotian is spelled "Memotien". I could be incorrect on this being a typo, however I wanted to mention this as it was spelled differently. This is due to the fact that I am unsure of who the man who named it, Bernard Phillipe Groslier is as there is no Wikipedia page for him. Overall, even though this page is not complete, I was able to learn a lot about the Memotian Circular Earthworks, when previously I had known almost nothing about these sites. Obviously pictures are a very useful tool to visually show information on a topic and I don't doubt that pictures will be added in the future, but that is one thing that I thing will improve the article. Overall this article does a good job at presenting the information on this subject as well as providing evidence for that information.