User:Madsngo/White coffee/Rikooka Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Madsngo
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Madsngo/White coffee

Lead evaluation
I didn't see a lead section in your draft, so i think you should write a brief summary to introduce the topic.

Content evaluation
I think overall, there was a lot of content and well written.

Tone and balance evaluation
The content was neutral, with no viewpoint that is overrepresented or underrepresented.

Sources and references evaluation
The sources was added and the content seemed to be backed up. However, I had a feeling that you weren't citing every time you mention a source in the text. I don't see many [1] or [2], so maybe you should cite whenever you are referring to the sources that you have found, so that the readers know where you got the information from.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * How can the content added be improved?

Overall evaluation
I think that the article seemed to be more complete and the content added was solid. I think if you add the lead section and add the sections that I assume you're working on, your article will be ready to be published! Good job!